we were creating bio poems to tell a story about ourselves. It was challenging because we had to come up with different ideas for each line. It was fun to go back and read our finished poem
Kia Ora Cassius! My name is Hana and I'm a year 6 at Yaldhurst Model School!
Wow Cassaius! Cool Bio poem! Is this about you? Or is it about someone else? Cause I can't tell. :(
For some reason, this reminds me of when I was told to write about myself on my very first blog post. I was a year 2 at the time. Or a year 3, I can't remember. ;-;
To improve, you could give us an explanation on why you did this. and perhaps, you could add a link, instead. Just type a work, and then highlight it. Somewhere on the top right, you'll see some sort of chain symbol. Click on it, and paste the link where it tells you. And then click off of it, and ta da! there' s a link!
My name is Farah and I am from Hay Park School. I found your Bio Poem really interesting and a little funny. I like how you have used some descriptive words in your writing, and I also like how you have written a lot about yourself not only your name, school, age and year. Maybe next time you could check your writing and check the full stops, Either way Nice work! If you wanna see some of my work you can check out my blog by clicking here.
Kia Ora Cassius! My name is Hana and I'm a year 6 at Yaldhurst Model School!
ReplyDeleteWow Cassaius! Cool Bio poem! Is this about you? Or is it about someone else? Cause I can't tell. :(
For some reason, this reminds me of when I was told to write about myself on my very first blog post. I was a year 2 at the time. Or a year 3, I can't remember. ;-;
To improve, you could give us an explanation on why you did this. and perhaps, you could add a link, instead. Just type a work, and then highlight it. Somewhere on the top right, you'll see some sort of chain symbol. Click on it, and paste the link where it tells you. And then click off of it, and ta da! there' s a link!
Keep up the good work!
- Hana
Hey there Cassaius,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Farah and I am from Hay Park School.
I found your Bio Poem really interesting and a little funny.
I like how you have used some descriptive words in your writing, and I also like how you have written a lot about yourself not only your name, school, age and year.
Maybe next time you could check your writing and check the full stops, Either way Nice work!
If you wanna see some of my work you can check out my blog by clicking here.